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Your Essay Technique is Costing You Marks – Fix It Now! 🚨

Hey Genies, 👋

Essay technique is everything.

You can know all the content inside out, but if you don’t structure your answer correctly, you’ll never hit those top marks.

I see this mistake all the time.

Students dump everything they know onto the page, hoping the examiner will be impressed by the volume of knowledge or they go off onto an irrelevant tangent!

But instead, they lose marks.

Why?

Because A-Level Economics isn’t about what you know—it’s about how well you apply it.

Here’s why your technique matters:

1️⃣ No Structure = No Clarity​
If your essay isn’t logically structured, examiners will struggle to follow your argument. And if they can’t follow it, they can’t award top marks.

2️⃣ Lack of Focus = Missed Marks​
If you write everything you know, without linking it directly to the question, you’re wasting time and missing the key points examiners are looking for.

3️⃣ Weak Evaluation = Capped Scores​
Even if you know all the theories, if you don’t evaluate properly—by testing the argument, specific to the question and application—you’ll never break past 17/25.

Fix It Before It’s Too Late!

This is exactly what I’ll be covering in the 5-Hour A* Economics Essay Writing Crash Course on March 9, 2025.

🔥 Here’s what you’ll learn:

✅ The exact structure for writing a 25-marker that gets full marks​
✅ How to differentiate between different types of 25-mark questions​
✅ How to use diagrams and context effectively in your answers​
✅ The ‘Why What Who’ method for bulletproof analysis​
✅ The step-by-step formula for writing A/A* evaluation​
✅ How to write judgment paragraphs that leave no doubt in the examiner’s mind​
✅ Live practice on the 2025 HOT TOPICAL essay questions!


🚀 This is the difference between an average answer and an A answer.*

If you’ve ever written a 25-marker and thought:

"I know my stuff, so why am I not getting 20+/25?"

This is your answer.

Don’t let poor technique cost you marks when it matters most.

Sign up for the Essay Writing Crash Course and master the technique before it’s too late.

📅 Date: March 9, 2025
⏳ Duration: 5 Hours of A* Essay Training
​🚨 Limited Spots Available – Secure Your Place Now!​


See you there.
Best,​
Emre 🚀

​The business of second-hand clothing is booming

Summary

📈 Booming Market: The second-hand clothing industry has surged to a $100bn market, up from $30bn-40bn in 2020. The resale market is growing 15 times faster than traditional retail, with second-hand sales projected to make up 10% of global apparel this year.

🌱 Sustainability Appeal: The fashion industry contributes 10% of global CO₂ emissions, surpassing shipping and air travel combined. Many consumers choose resale for environmental reasons, but affordability remains the biggest driver.

💰 Cost Advantage: Second-hand designer items on Vestiaire are, on average, 33% cheaper than new fast fashion, with even bigger savings on coats (64%) and dresses (72%). Analysts estimate $200bn worth of luxury goods sit unused in wardrobes, but only 3% enter the resale market yearly.

🛍️ Resale Made Easier: Platforms like Vinted and Depop have scrapped seller fees, shifting costs to buyers to encourage listings.AI-driven tools are being developed to speed up the selling process and help with pricing and descriptions.

🔍 Authentication Tech: Trust in resale is key, with startups developing innovative ways to verify authenticity.Osmo authenticates shoes by odour, while Ordre creates a “digital fingerprint” for luxury goods.

📉 Profitability Challenges:
Many resale platforms remain unprofitable, with The RealReal and thredUp seeing significant stock declines since listing.Vinted is one of the few profitable firms, thanks to investments in logistics, payments, and security.

⚔️ Rising Competition:
Traditional resale platforms now compete with major brands like Lululemon and The North Face launching their own resale initiatives.Social media platforms, such as TikTok, are also becoming key resale channels.

 🏁 The Future of Resale: As the market grows, concerns rise over big tech giants potentially disrupting the industry.However, with vast untapped wardrobes, the second-hand clothing boom shows no signs of slowing down. 🚀

A Level Economics Questions:

Q. Evaluate the extent to which the rise of second-hand clothing markets can be attributed to price elasticity of demand (PED) rather than changing consumer preferences
A. The rise of second-hand clothing markets can be linked to PED, as second-hand goods are more price-elastic due to their lower prices, making them attractive in times of economic downturn. However, changing consumer preferences, including sustainability concerns, also play a role. If price was the only factor, we would expect luxury resale to decline, yet demand remains strong. The extent to which PED dominates depends on consumer income levels and the availability of substitutes.

Q. To what extent does the second-hand clothing industry correct the market failure caused by the fashion industry's environmental impact? Justify your answer with economic theory.

A.The second-hand clothing industry reduces negative externalities by lowering waste and emissions, potentially addressing market failure caused by fast fashion. However, this depends on whether resale replaces new purchases or simply increases overall consumption (the rebound effect). If resale markets encourage more frequent fashion cycles, the long-term sustainability impact may be weaker. Government policies, such as taxes on new fast fashion, could further correct market failure.

Q. Discuss whether increased competition from social media platforms and major clothing brands in the resale market will lead to greater efficiency or market failure.

A. Greater competition in resale markets could lead to lower prices and increased efficiency, benefiting consumers. However, it may also drive smaller firms out of the market and reduce profitability for existing platforms. If large firms, like social media platforms or fashion brands, dominate resale, they may create barriers to entry and reduce innovation. Market failure could arise if monopolistic behaviour emerges, limiting consumer choice.

Q. How might behavioural economic concepts, such as loss aversion and bounded rationality, influence consumer decisions to buy or sell second-hand clothing.

A. Consumers may be reluctant to sell used clothes due to loss aversion, overvaluing items they own. Bounded rationality could lead buyers to choose fast fashion over resale due to perceived convenience, even if second-hand is cheaper. Social norms also play a role—if second-hand fashion is seen as trendy, more consumers will adopt it. Understanding these biases is crucial for resale platforms to encourage participation.

Possible A Level Economics 25 Marker Question

Evaluate the impact of a significant shift towards second-hand clothing consumption on economic growth, inflation, and international trade patterns

Infographic of the Week

The Decline of Remote Work Across Industries

A significant shift back to in-office work is underway, with the share of in-person workers across industries doubling to 68% in 2024, up from 34% in 2023. The consumer and retail sector saw the highest rise, with 87% of employees returning to the office, followed by education (84%) and healthcare (73%). Public sector jobs also saw a notable shift, influenced by government mandates requiring federal employees to return. Major corporations like JP Morgan, Amazon, and Nike have enforced office attendance, contributing to the overall decline in remote work to just 17% in 2024, down from 44% in 2023. While companies push for in-office collaboration, employee preferences remain divided between flexibility and structured workplace engagement.


Chart of the Week

The Paradox of Female Entrepreneurship in Wealthy Nations​

A study by the Global Entrepreneurship Research Association reveals that female entrepreneurship is more prevalent in middle-income countries such as Ecuador, Jordan, and Thailand, compared to many high-income nations, especially in Europe and East Asia. While necessity-driven entrepreneurship thrives in developing economies due to limited formal job opportunities, innovation-driven entrepreneurialism in wealthier countries coexists with strong formal employment markets, limiting the need for women to start businesses. Notably, Saudi Arabia and some high-income American nations like Canada and the U.S. outperform their European counterparts. However, some developed nations, including Germany and South Korea, report low female entrepreneurship rates, with traditional corporate cultures and gender disparities influencing business ownership trends. Interestingly, in some regions, narrower gender gaps in entrepreneurship may signal job market inequalities, pushing women into self-employment due to limited career progression in formal sectors.


Macroeconomic Data


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